Kristen Feige
ideas:
  • When you first walk into the town, you aren't impressed; the streets are filthy and the townspeople tired from work.
  • The buildings are packed tightly together and it gives you a sense of claustrophobia when you realize the air is full of smog.
  • You notice that there are no large factories, just small privately owned businesses. The smog floats in from a large city nearby.
  • Soon you realize that there is more to this small city.
  • Everyone in it acts like one big family, and they will gladly include you.
  • The children you see have dirty clothing but they are content with their lives as they play baseball in the street.
  • You see very friendly faces, including a very old woman who works in a wash shop. When you pass by her store, you see her washing clothes in a tin full of dirty soap water, and then hanging them on lines draped across the room.

  • You learn everyones' names and personalities very quickly.